Tuesday, February 16, 2016

GIFT



It was 2 years ago.“ Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday happy birthday, happy birthday to you!” . It was 12pm. I woke up and i saw my family was singing birthday song for me. “Happy birthday dear, we hope in your new age you become a better person who can makes God always happy and proud of you, and hopefully  you can be a respectful daughter” said my Father with a birthday cake on his hands.  I made a wish and blew the candle on top of the cake. My Mother gave me a box which was wrapped with pink wrapping paper which is my favourite colour. I opened it and saw an iphone that i’ve dreamed for a long time. My eyes opened wide and i shouted “ You are the best, Mom!” . Time passed and untill one day , i woke up late for school and I prepared myself hurriedly and went to school. I forgot to put my phone in my drawer to locked it. At that time, i thought that it would be alright and nothing bad was going to happened.But when i got home, i didn’t see my phone. I was very panic. I asked my maid and she said there were just workmen got out of my room around 30 minutes before i reached home.  I said what just happened to my Mother haltingly. She got mad. I felt like i was dissapointing my Mother. Fortunately, my cousin helped me with blocking my phone so no one could used my phone. She blocked my phone and wrote a short message “This iphone has lost, please called ****** ( my Father’s phone number) if you have found it, thankyou.” Three months later, someone called my Father and yes it was my phone founder. My phone was back and i thanked to God for helping me found the phone. 

2 comments:

  1. I think the flow of your story is great, easy to understand and makes the reader (included me)to become curious on what is going on next :)

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  2. Your composition is great but i found some grammar mistakes so i suggest the writer can fix the grammar mistakes

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