Last Monday, i went to Pine Forest for a camp (scout camp). We arrived at school at around 5.30 am to gather with the teachers. We started our journey by riding truck it can be said as an army truck. We arrived after around 2 hours and my class' truck arrived the latest from all trucks because of traffic jam. We joined the opening ceremony and we were allowed to move our belongings to the tents. In the afternoon, there were games. We played even though it was raining. Before we slept, we all were scolded by the teachers for various mistakes. We were punished by the teachers. We were made by the teachers to squat and stand.
The next day, we cooked our breakfast by ourselves. My group made a delicious pork rice. After filling our tummies, we prepared ourselves to go back home.
Although this camp is very tiring, i got a lot important lessons.
Thank you for reading! <3
Alicia, you must write 'i' in capital 'I'.
ReplyDeleteThe sentences 'we started .....' and 'it can be said' are unable to be combined without any conjunction. Use conjunctions or make into 2 sentences.